问题标题：
【求批改英语作文.Howisgoing?Ourteacherreadyourexceptionallywell-writtenessayyesterday.Whenit'sover,IknowIwasimpressedbyyourexceptionallywell-writtenessay.Ifeelitverybeautiful.Ibelievethateveryonecanfeelit.What'smor】
问题描述：
求批改英语作文.
Howisgoing?Ourteacherreadyourexceptionallywell-writtenessayyesterday.Whenit'sover,IknowIwasimpressedbyyourexceptionallywell-writtenessay.Ifeelitverybeautiful.Ibelievethateveryonecanfeelit.
What'smoreIhavelearnedlotsofthingsformMr.Fleagle'scommentsonhisessaysinceitover.Itcanbeseenasfollow.Ontheonehand,nopains,nogains.Mr.Fleaglehaverecognizedyourefforts.Ialsowork-hardinginthenexttime.IbelievethatIcandoit!Effortsmakesuccess!Ontheotherhand,Ilearnedsomethingabouthowtogetonwellwithmyfriends.Weshouldlearntosharewithothers.
I'mlookingforwardtoyourletterassoonaspossible
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点建议也行啊
语法错误来点新颖句子也行
沈云涛回答：
句子比较简单,以主语I开始的太多,可以换个说法.
刘国荣回答：
具体怎么做
沈云涛回答：
比如Ifeelitverybeautiful可以直接就it‘ssoprofessionalthateveryonecanfeelit.
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