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改错误（每行可能有一处错误,请指出并改正）有深圳小学英语配套家庭练习册的,Fishandchips,andChinesetake-awayfoodisverypopularinEngland.ButtheyarefewerpopularinAmerica.IntheUSA,theyeattake-awayfoo
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改错误（每行可能有一处错误,请指出并改正）有深圳小学英语配套家庭练习册的,
Fishandchips,andChinesetake-awayfoodisverypopularinEngland.ButtheyarefewerpopularinAmerica.IntheUSA,theyeattake-awayfood,also,likechildren.Butthemostpopulartake-awayfoodisthehamburger.Itlooklikebreadhasmeatinit.Hamisakindofport,butthehamburgerdoesn'thavesomeporkinit.Ithasbeefinit.Thebeefisinsideakindofcake.Hamburgersisdelicious.TheyareverypopularintheUSA,eveninEnglandandAustralia.
刘立钧回答：
FishandchipsandChinesetakeawayfoodisverypopularinEngland.ButtheyarelesspopularinAmerica.IntheUSA,theyeattakeawayfood,likechildren.Butthemostpopulartakeawayfoodishamburger.Itlookslikebreadhasmeatinit.Hamisakindofpork,butthehamburgerdoesn'thaveanyporkinit.Ithasbeefinit.Thebeefisinsideakindofcake.Hamburgersaredelicious.TheyareverypopularintheUSA,eveninEnglandandAustralia.
1.and之前不加逗号
2.takeaway好像中间没有-
3.因为你后面是“Buttheyare..."那么应该是are吧
4.lesspopular
5.also可以不要,也可以改成too
6.hamburger前不用定冠词
7.Itlooks
8.Hamisakindofpork,拼错了吧
9.doesn'thaveanypork否定some要改成any
10.最后一行Hamburgersare吧
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