【英语帝帮我看看这篇作文的语法问题和表达不当之处ThetableshowsthepercentageofexpenditureonthreecategoriesinconsumableinfiveEuropeancountriesin2002.InTurkey,aboutthethirdexpenditurewasspentonfood,drinksand】|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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【英语帝帮我看看这篇作文的语法问题和表达不当之处ThetableshowsthepercentageofexpenditureonthreecategoriesinconsumableinfiveEuropeancountriesin2002.InTurkey,aboutthethirdexpenditurewasspentonfood,drinksand】

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英语帝帮我看看这篇作文的语法问题和表达不当之处

ThetableshowsthepercentageofexpenditureonthreecategoriesinconsumableinfiveEuropeancountriesin2002.

InTurkey,aboutthethirdexpenditurewasspentonfood,drinksandtobacco,whichtookupthelargestshareinthefivecountries,followedbyIrelandwith28.91%.Thepercentagesoftheremainingcountrieswereprettysimilar(18.80%inSpain,16.36%inItaly,15.77%inSweden).

Refertoclothingandfootwear,itseemsthatItalianprefertobuythesetwoitemsthantheothercountries,whichcostthem9.00%intheirspending.Andaround6.5%moneywasconsumedbyTurkey,SpainandIreland.Swedishpeopleonceagainshowedtheleastfavoronthetwogoodsliketheformerones,withapercentageof5.40%.

However,itisshockedthatrelativelylessmoneywasspentonleisureandeducationcomparedwithothertwocategories.ThecountrythatdevotedthelargestpercentageinexpenditurewasTurkey,withafigureof4.35%,whichwasonly1.98%inSpainwhostoodinthelastplace.

Overall,food,drinksandtobaccowasaprincipaldailyspendinginthefivecountriesin2002,moremoneysupposedtodevoteintoleisureandeducation.

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　　翻译得很不错.尤其是你认真诚恳的态度,让人不能不回答,更不能不认真回答. 　　我比较确定的改动用{}[]标示.感觉不太合适但又不知如何改处加? 　　只是个人看法,仅共参考.希望对你有所帮助.有疑问亦可QQ我.讨论哈. 　　ThetableshowsthepercentageofexpenditureonthreecategoriesinconsumableinfiveEuropeancountriesin2002. 　　InTurkey,about{thethird}[onethirdofthe]expenditurewasspentonfood,drinksandtobacco,whichtookupthelargestshareinthefivecountries,followedbyIrelandwith28.91%.Thepercentagesoftheremainingcountrieswereprettysimilar(18.80%inSpain,16.36%inItaly,15.77%inSweden). 　　{Referto}[Asto]clothingandfootwear,itseemsthat{Italianprefertobuythesetwoitemsthantheothercountries?},whichcostthem9.00%intheirspending.Andaround6.5%[of]moneywasconsumedby{Turkey,SpainandIreland?eachofthem?}.Swedishpeopleonceagainshowedtheleastfavoron[in]thetwogoodsliketheformerones,withapercentageof5.40%. 　　However,itisshockedthatrelativelylessmoneywasspentonleisureandeducationcomparedwithothertwocategories.Thecountrythatdevotedthelargest{percentagein}[percentof]expenditure[inthiscategory]wasTurkey,withafigureof4.35%,whichwasonly1.98%inSpainwhostoodinthelastplace. 　　{Overall}[Insummary],food,drinksandtobaccowasaprincipaldailyspendinginthefivecountriesin2002,[though]moremoney[was]supposedtodevote{into}[to]leisureandeducation.

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