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【英语语法问题AsfarasIamconcerned,careerachievementandmonetaryreturnwereimportant,butwereitlefttometodecidewhetherweshallchoosecareerachievementormonetaryreturn,Ishallnothesitateamomenttopreferthelatter.[教师】
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英语语法问题
AsfarasIamconcerned,careerachievementandmonetaryreturnwereimportant,butwereitlefttometodecidewhetherweshallchoosecareerachievementormonetaryreturn,Ishallnothesitateamomenttopreferthelatter.[教师点评][低频警示]choose...achievement在语料库中无此用法,疑似中式英语 好评报错[句子错误]本句语法不规范,请检查! 好评报错
[名词错误]冠词缺失,choosecareer不规范,建议修改. 好评报错
不清楚哪里有问题
韩忠明回答:
好久不看语法,随便说说,你就当意见看吧.1.第一句话为什么用were不是are,说明一个事实没有特别时间说明,应该用arebothimportant吧;2.第二句特别的乱,wereitlefttome能不能简化成butwereIlefttodecide;3.既然是Idecide,怎么能decideweshalldosomething,应该是decide自己dosomething,因此自己可以省略,简化为todecidetochoosewhethercaormr;4.虚拟语气的主句没有用shall的,换成would吧;5.nothesitateamomenttoprefer觉得很奇怪啊,换成preferthesecondwithoutanyhesitate顺口多了;
结果:ASfarasIamconcerned,careerachievementandmonetaryreturnarebothimportant.ButwereIlefttodecidetochoosewhethercareerachievementormonetaryreturn,Iwouldpreferthesecondwithoutanyhesitate.
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