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【一篇英语小文章指出英语语法错误itseems,ihavethesimilarexpenriceastheheroofmovie,iguessit'swhythemoviehasbeendeeplymovingme.wheniwasteenage,ionceaddictincpmputegame,iplayeditallthedays,allthenight】
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一篇英语小文章

指出英语语法错误

itseems,ihavethesimilarexpenriceastheheroofmovie,iguess

it'swhythemoviehasbeendeeplymovingme.

wheniwasteenage,ionceaddictincpmputegame,iplayeditallthedays,allthenights

andallthetime.forme,computerjusylikeadrug,ican'tcontrolmyself,ormaybeijust

avoidedfacereality.

nofriend,nostudy.liveaworldofmeandinternet.everythingdon'tmakesense.

inthisway,iwasteallfouryearsinschool

certainly,iwasrealrealbadatstudy,thescorealmostnearthelastone.

butthan,infactistillcan'tremberwhichtheday,whatthethingmadeidecidetochange

.yes,iwanttochange,idon'twanttofeeldepressanymore,iwanttomylifeandmyself

yes,iwouldneverletmydreamdied,altoughsomestupidididbefore

iwasstudysohardthatevenattheweekendistillgototheschool

itnotaboast,ispendtwoyeartolearn6yearsubjectinschool,andiwasthebestinmy

classandlittlefamousinourschool

仇国庆回答:
  itseemsthat,i..   it'swhythemoviehasmovedmedeeply.   wheniwasateenager..   ioncewasaddictedtocpmputegame,iplayeditallthedaysandnights.这样就可以了.   forme,computerisjusylikeadrug,ican'tcontrolmyself,ormaybeijustavoidedfacingreality.   liveaworldofmeandinternet.不如改为liveinaworldonlymeandtheinternet..   inthisway,iwasteallfouryearsinschoolcertainly不如改为   ofcourse,iwastedallthefouryearsinschool.   iwasrealrealbadatstudy,thescorealmostnearthelastone   不如改为:iwasreallybadatstudy,iwasalwaysthelastonesinmyclass...   butthan,infactistillcan'tremberwhichtheday,whatthethingmadeidecidetochange   不如改为   butthen,somethinghappenedthatmademedecidetochange,however,icouldn'tremembertheexacttime..   don'twanttofeeldepressanymore,iwanttomylifeandmyself   yes,iwouldneverletmydreamdied   改为idon'twanttodepressanyone,iwanttoliveanewlife.   iwouldmakemydreamcometrue.   altoughsomestupidididbefore   iwasstudysohardthatevenattheweekendistillgototheschool   itnotaboast,ispendtwoyeartolearn6yearsubjectinschool,andiwasthebestinmy   classandlittlefamousinourschool   改为,   althoughididsomestupidthingsinthefuture,iwasstudinghardthatevenattheweekends,iwouldgotoschool.itwasnotaboast   ispenttwoyearstolearn6-yearsubjectsinschool.   andiwasthebestoneinmyclassandiamalittlefamousinmyschool.
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