高考英语作文请帮我修改

某英语报就一副漫画举行一次征文活动。applesandnewton2漫画的类容是一个小男孩站在树下读书，其父亲站在树上把苹果网他身上摔。其母递苹果给其父亲。下面是我写的，请大家帮我修改一下我的语法错误。thisacartoonpicture.fromthepicture.alittlechildwasreadingundertheappletree.hisfatherinthetreeandthrewsomeapplestochild'shead.hismotherhelpshisfarther.asknown.applefromtreeisawonderfulstory.newtonisagreatscientistintheworld.nowdays.somepartenshopetheirchildwillbecomeascientistorasuccessfulbuinessman.so.theytakesomemesuresinordertotheirchildwillasuccessfullife.butsometimestheydon'tcareabouttheirchild'shobby.doyouthinkit?ifyoudon'tthinkit.youcanseethepicture.please.

lifeisjustlikeanewly-fallensnow,whereyouchoosetowalk.evrystepwillshow.ihopeparenswouldbecareabouttheirchildhert.don'tdoitlikethepicuture!大家见笑了我写得很差，我英语成绩不好。