字典翻译 问答 小学 作文 有人能帮我看看这个托福作文能得多少分么?Question:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.Usespecificreasonsandexamples
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有人能帮我看看这个托福作文能得多少分么?Question:Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.Usespecificreasonsandexamples
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有人能帮我看看这个托福作文能得多少分么?

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Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?

Alwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantconsiderationinanyrelationshipbetweenpeople.

Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouranswer.

Somepeoplebelievethatinanyrelationshipbetweenalwaystellingthetruthisthemostimportantthing.Inmyopinion,beinghonestistherightthing,butnotnecessary.

Everyonehashissecretswhichshouldonlykeepbyhimself.Sometimeotherpeopledon'tknowthethingsthatthemanwhokeepasecretdon'twantotherpeopleknowandtheyasksomethingrelatedtoit,andthemanfacesuchadilemma.IfIwerehim,Iwon'ttellthetruthtothepeoplewhohasaskedme.Becausethisismyownthings,Ihavetherighttokeepitfromothers.What'smore,nottellingthetruthwon'tinfluenceanythingbetweenus,Ibelievethatifheismyrealfriendhewillunderstandmybehavioranddomyfavor.

ThereisanothersituationthatIwon'ttellthetruthtoanotherpeopleifitwillhurthim.Asyouknow,afewofbeautifulliesarenecessarysometime.Forinstant,apersonwhowillattendaimportanttesttomorrowhassomethingnotgoodinhisfamily,andIwilldecidetellhimwhetherornot.Iwillsay"no".Thereasonisthatthingshadhappened,andhecan'tdoanythingaboutthat.IfItoldhim,notonlycanhedonothingexceptworriedbutalsohemayfailintotheexamtoalargeextant.Thisisnotwisdom.

However,webelieveyoucantellaliewhenyouhavesomeimportantreasons.Whereasyoushouldtellthetruthformostthings,becausehonestisthefoundationtoanyrelationship.Ithinknoonewilllikeamanwhoalwaystelllies.Andthepeoplewhoalwaystelllieswillloseotherstrust.

Aboveall,myviewisthatyoucantellalie,butshouldnotalways,onlyifyoumustdoit.

李良君回答:
  同学,ETS作文评分很诡异,所以不知道能给你多少确切的分数,但是我觉得字数上有待提高,还有需要再补充一些语法变换和长难句,一些高级词汇有一定加分因素,还有是逻辑结构需要再清晰,举例再细致.你可以在小马过河上贴你的文章
谷建华回答:
  这篇作文的语法时态啊什么的有很多错误么?
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