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Iagreewiththespeaker'sbroadstatementthattheabilityofhumantothinkforthemselveswilldeteriorateundersomecircumstancesifwerelyontechnologytoomuch.However,thespeakeroverlooksthebenefitsbroughtfromthetechnology.So,atleasttosomeextent,theassertionmightbetooextreme.
Iconcedethattheabilityofhumanswilldeteriorateifwecouldn'tusethetechnologyproperly.Adimittedly,althoughthetechnologydevelopsatafastspeed,peoplebecomestupidandshort-sightedinsomecases.First,webecometoolazytothinkforourselvesbecausetheintelligentmachinesaresosmartthattheycanhelpusdiagnosediseases,drawupplans,andsolvesdifficultproblemsefficiently.Wealwaysseekhelpfromthemachinesatoncewhenmeetingtrouble.Astimepasses,wemaylosesomebasicskills,includingtheskilltothink.Moreover,thetechnologyleadstosometroublethatmakessocietychaos-forinstance,theenvironmentalpollution,thethreatofnuclearpollution,theconflictsbetweencountries,andsoforth.Moreandmorequestionwillappearifwecan'tusetechnologyinarightway.Fromthatperspective,thetechnologydoharmforpeopleindeed.
Asidefromtheforegoingtworespects,however,Ifundamentallydisagreewithspeaker'sclaim.Foronething,ourlivingstandardhasimprovedwiththehelpoftechnology.Consider,forexample,technologyhelpsusimproveourmedicallevel,averagelifetime,andlivingquality-allofwhichareimportantforthesociety.Wecanthinkbetteraftersolvingtheproblemaboutadequatefoodandcloth.Besides,thetechnologymakesitpossibletocommunicatewithothersanytimeandanywhere,wecansharethoughtseachothereasily,andtheexchangeofthoughtishelpfulforourabilityofthinking.Mostimportant,however,machinesaredesignedtohelppeople.Thus,theyareonlyauxiliaryroletothehumans.Justimagine,therecan'tbeanymachinewithoutthethoughtofhumans.So,asweinventsmartermachines,ourabilitytothinkhasimprovedindeed.
Insum,technologyisonlyfortheserviceofhuman,butitisofimportance.Ourlifecouldn'tdevelopapartfromit.Accordingly,wehumansshoulduseitproperlytohelpuscreatemoreusefulthings.