【英语翻译Therapiddevelopmentoftheknowledgeeconomymadetheinternettobeathemes.Itisnotonlyasymbolizeofthefashionandtrend,butalsoacountry’sembodimentofthetechnologicalleveleventhecomprehensivenationalstrength.Alth】|小学英语问答-字典翻译问答网

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【英语翻译Therapiddevelopmentoftheknowledgeeconomymadetheinternettobeathemes.Itisnotonlyasymbolizeofthefashionandtrend,butalsoacountry’sembodimentofthetechnologicalleveleventhecomprehensivenationalstrength.Alth】

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Therapiddevelopmentoftheknowledgeeconomymadetheinternettobeathemes.Itisnotonlyasymbolizeofthefashionandtrend,butalsoacountry’sembodimentofthetechnologicalleveleventhecomprehensivenationalstrength.Althoughwebeginthecomputerverylate,butitisswiftinaction.DependonthedatadisplayfromtheCNNI:cutoffdatefromJulne,2001,theonlineroftheChinamorethantwentymillion,thereinto,therearealargenumberofteenager.Butwhataretheydoingontheinternet?What’stheinfluenceoftheinternet?Advantagesordisadvantages?Itinfluencestheteenager’sPhysicalandMentalHealthaswellastheirphilosophy、valuessomanyareas.Weneedtoanalysistheimmanentcauseoftheinternet’sinfluencesothatwecanenhancethemanagementonthewebandsupervisionbypublicopinion,promotetheInternetindustrydevelopinahealthywayforthepublic,especiallytheteenagers.请帮我改改语法,

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　　1,Itisnotonlyasymbolizeofthefashionandtrend,这句,改成倒装会更高级：notonlyisit…… 　　2.Althoughwebeginthecomputerverylate,这句不好,根据你的意思可以修改成Althoughwedidn‘tmakeagreatprogressinearlyyears. 　　3,Depend-->Depending,teenager--->teenagers 　　4,theirphilosophy、valuessomanyareas.顿号改逗号,英语没顿号.somanyareas改成andsoon 　　5,Weneedtoanalysistheimmanentcauseoftheinternet’sinfluencesothatwecanenhancethemanagementonthewebandsupervisionbypublicopinion,promotetheInternetindustrydevelopinahealthywayforthepublic,especiallytheteenagers最后一句有点混乱,不一定非要用上sothat句型,而且especiallytheteenagers也略显啰嗦. 　　theimmanentcauseoftheinternet’sinfluenceshouldbeanalysisedthatthemanagementonthewebandsupervisionbypublicopinionwillbeenhanced.Inall,letusgoforittomakeamoreharmonyenvironmentofInternet! 　　如果我的回答能给予您一定的帮助,! 　　不要

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