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Acoinhastwosides.A“however”doesexistallthetime.Everythinghasitsbenefitsanditsdrawbacks.Sometimeswearemorelikelytobeimpressedbythenegativeinfluence,suchasfrustration,andneglectthepositivefacet.The“however”remindsmeofagreatmaninthefieldofscience,AlfredBernhardNobel.
Nobelheld355differentpatents,dynamiteisthemostfamous.AndthebirthofdynamitecostNobelalot.Before1867,peopleusednitroglycerinwhichhasapoorstabilityasexplosive.Itcausedmanydeathsofworkerseveryyear.Inordertoprotectpeople’ssafety,Nobletriedhisbesttomakesomeimprovementonthebasisofnitroglycerin.Then,heburiedhimselfintoexperimentsdayandnight.
Outofeverybody’sexpectation,thepathtosuccessisextremelyrugged.Theexperimentsareout-and-outnightmares.Oncehislabwasblewup,notonlyhehimselfwasinjured,butmanyofhisassistantsdied,includinghisdearbrother.Hisneighboursaresoscaredthattheyalienatedhimandgraduallymovedaway.Eventhegovernmentstartedtoforbidhimfromdoingexperience.Withoutanysupport,Noblestilldidn’tsubmittothedreadfulsituation,madeuphismindtogettheachievementinstead.PlacingthelabontheMalarenLake,Noblecontinuedtofindtherootwhereproblemsoccurred.HechangedtheprimacordandusedHg(ONC)2tomaketheprimer.Finally,theMalarenLakebecamethewitnessofhissuccess,thepavementofhispersistence,courageandmeritofexploring.
IfNoblehadnotgonethroughtheexperimentsandmetthecripplingconsequence,hecouldnotgainsomuchinformationabouttheproductinordertogetabettersolvement.Ifitwas’tthegriefabouthisrelatives’deathsandtheobjectionoftheneighboursandgovernment,hewouldn’tbecomesoaggressivetofinishtheresearch,thedynamitewouldn’tbeinvented,numbersofdeathscausedbylow-securityemplosivewouldkeepincreasing,andallthepreviouseffortswouldbeturnedtonothing.So,valueisnotfoundonlyinsuccess.Difficultiescan’tbethestumblingstone.Failure,ifonelearnsfromit,canleadtoaccomplishment.