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【麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,IfIhave5millionRMB,whatwouldidealwithit?IfIhave5millionRMB,itishardtosaywhatIwoulddo,MaybeIcanchangemylife,Atfirst,Iwouldbuyabighouseformyf】
问题描述：
麻烦帮看一下我写的这篇作文有那些语法错误,我是新手,
IfIhave5millionRMB,whatwouldidealwithit?
IfIhave5millionRMB,itishardtosaywhatIwoulddo,MaybeIcanchangemylife,Atfirst,Iwouldbuyabighouseformyfamily.And,Iwouldbiringmywholefamilyhaveaholiday,Then,I'llmakeastudyplanandacquireasmoretrainingaspossible,IthinkIdon'thavethecapabilitytomangerthelargeamountmoney,Atlast,Ihavetogotowork.Therearesomanyfriendsinthecompany.
潘玮炜回答：
第一行Maybe前面的逗号改成句号,Atfirst前面的逗号改成句号.
第二行bring改成take,family后面加to.
第三行more改成much,possible后面的逗号改成句号.
第四行manager改成manage,At前面的逗号改成句号.
注意：逗号后面的句子第一个词小写,句号后面的句子第一个词要大写.
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