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我的作文,请问有哪些语法错误?（作文题目是Whatcanwedotofightpollution）内容：Whatcanwedotofightpollution?First,wemustputtherubbishintorubbishbins.Sencond,wemustn'tusetoomanyplasticbags.Then,wemustplant
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我的作文,请问有哪些语法错误?（作文题目是Whatcanwedotofightpollution）
内容：Whatcanwedotofightpollution?First,wemustputtherubbishintorubbishbins.Sencond,wemustn'tusetoomanyplasticbags.Then,wemustplantmoretrees.Wemusttakeabusorrideabikeorwalktoschool.Andwemustcloseallthelightsandfanswhenweleavearoom.Wemustcloseallthewindowswhenweusetheair-conditioner.
内容：Whatcanwedotofightpollution?First,wemustputtherubbishintorubbishbins.Sencond,wemustn'tusetoomanyplasticbags.Then,wemustplantmoretrees.Wemusttakeabusorrideabikeorwalktoschool.Andwemustcloseallthelightsandfanswhenweleavearoom.Wemustcloseallthewindowswhenweusetheair-conditioner.Let'stryourbesttofightpollution!
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Whatcanwedotofightpollution?First,wemustput【删掉the】rubbishintorubbishbins.【Sencond拼错了,是second】,wemustn'tusetoomanyplasticbags.【改Then为Third(这里用then不适合)】,wemustplantmoretrees.Wemust【改“takeabusorrideabikeorwalktoschool”为gettoschooleitherbybus,bikeoronfoot】.【改And为Inaddition或Furthermore】wemust【改close为turnoff】allthelightsandfanswhenweleavearoom.Wemustcloseall【删掉the】windowswhenweuse【改the为an】air-conditioner.
注:"Second,wemustn'tusetoomanyplasticbags"这句话虽然没有语法错误.但是你的题目是“Whatcanwedotofightpollution".你给的是”我们不该做什么“的答案,但是给一个”我们该做什么的“肯定句式更好些.因此,建议把这一句话改为"Second,wemustreducetheamountofplasticbagsweuse."(我们应当减少用塑料袋的数量).
fight后面against可加可不加.
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