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初一英语作文帮助改改collectingcardsmakesmehappyIcollcetcards.Istartedthecollectionfiveyearsago.NowIhaveover3000cards.Ilikecollectingcardsbecausetheycanbeachmealetabouthistory.Myfirstcardisfromthearound.Ip
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初一英语作文帮助改改collectingcardsmakesmehappy
Icollcetcards.Istartedthecollectionfiveyearsago.NowIhaveover3000cards.Ilikecollectingcardsbecausetheycanbeachmealetabouthistory.Myfirstcardisfromthearound.Ipickedatfiveyearsago.Myfavouritecardhasapictureofbobotonit.Mycardsalmostfromtheshops.Ilikecardsverygood.It'scool!
廖龙涛回答:
你的错误好多.单词有好多写错了.下文我已帮你修改完了.
Ilikecollcetingcards.Istartedtocollectionfiveyearsago.NowIhaveover3000cards.IlikecollectingcardsbecauseTheycanmakemeunderstandhistory.Myfirstcardisfromthearound.Ipickedaboutfiveyearsago.Myfavouritecardhasapictureofrobotonit.Mycardsalmostfromtheshops.Ilikecardsverymuch.It'scool!
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