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【pleasehelpmecheckmylanguangeandcorrectit.thankyou!aftermanyroundofdiscussion,wefinallycometoadecisiontomakeasocialawarenessadvertisementaboutnonsmokingissuesduringthepregnancy.wecomeoutwiththisideawheniaccident】
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pleasehelpmecheckmylanguangeandcorrectit.thankyou!
aftermanyroundofdiscussion,wefinallycometoadecisiontomakeasocialawarenessadvertisementaboutnonsmokingissuesduringthepregnancy.wecomeoutwiththisideawheniaccidentallyseeacigaratteadvertisementonamagazine.atthebottomtherehaveasuchwarning:expectantmothersmokingduringprenancywillmakethebabybirthweightsmallerandbeingbornpremature.suddenly,ihaveathoughtthattousethisconcepttodomyadvertisementtoalertourexpectant.
nottranslateitbuthelpmetocheckmyenglishwhetheritiscorrect.
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Aftermanyroundsdiscussion,finally,wedecitetomakeasocialawarenessadvertisementonnonsmokingissuesduringthepregnancy.wegettheideafromacigaratteadvertisementonamagazine.thereis...
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