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Thetopicofeducationneverfailedtoraiseahotissueamongpublic.Somepeoplethinkthatteachingiseasierthanbeforeduototheadvancedfacilitiessuchascomputersandprojectors.Asforme,however,eventhoughwithdevelopedtechnology,teachingisharderthanitwasinthepast.

First,nowadays,parentsattachmoreimportancetochildren’sacademicperformance.Theycareaboutthequalityoftheeducationthattheirkidsreceived.Consequently,teachersundertakemorepressurethanbefore.Iftheydon’tteachwell,theywillgetcomplaintfromparentsandevenlosetheopportunityofpromotion.Takemyfamilyasanexample,whenmymotherwasinschool,mygrandmotherneveraskedheraboutthegrade,eitherurgehertostudy.ButwhenIwasinhighschool,mymotherpaidattentiontomyscoreineverytest.Shealsokeptclosecontactwithmyteacherstoknowmyacademicperformance.Asyoucansee,thepressurefromparentsmakesteachingharder.

What’smore,inordertoattractmorestudents,schoolsestablishaseriesofpolicytoteachers.Forexample,schoolsorganizestudentstoappraiseteachersperiodically,andaccordingtheassessmenttorewardorpunishteachers.Soteachersmustworkerhardertoavoidpunishment.Andinsomeschool,theysethighstandardswhentheyemployingteachers.Onlyhighlyeducatedcandidatescanbeengaged.So,ifonewantstobecomeateacher,heorshehastogetacredentialwhichismuchhigherthanbefore.

Finally,duotothewidespreadofcomputersandhandphones,peoplecangetthelatestnewsfromallovertheworld.Thatistosay,ateacher’sbehaviorissupervisedbythesociety.Forexample,akindergarteninmyhometownonceprovokedaheateddiscussioninsociety.Ateacherofthatkindergartenscoldedalittleboyandfisticuffhim.Thensomeoneputthevideoonwebsite,soonafter,manypeoplewatchedthevideoandwereannoyedwiththerudeteacher.Theteacherturnedouttobedismissedeventhoughsheapologizedtotheboyandsociety.Theteacher’sbehaviorisinappropriate,thankstothewebsite,theteachergetpunishment.Thecasemanifeststhatpublicalsovalueeducation,andwiththehelpofmoderntechnology,theygetmoreinformationaboutteachers.Teachersaresupposedtoworkbettertogetrespect.