语法出错很多以下是更改后的文章： 　　AllsummerinaDaybyRayBradbury.Thisstoryisaboutayounggirl,livingonVenuscametotheEarth.Venusjusthasahourofsummerwhichmeanonehourofsunforeverysevenyears.Margot,themaincharacter,orderkidsdeprivedhersummer;theylockherinacloset,becauseMargotwasdifferenttoorderkids. 　　Thestorymakewereader,acannotjoinandfeeling’sworld,asadstory.Forwholesummer,ofadayMargotislockinacloset,andcannotseethesunofshe'sbeenlongforsinceherfirstcametoliveonVenus.Thekidsinherclasstraphergoincloset,becausetheythinkMargotactsasifshewasbettertheneverybody,shecametoVenusaftertheorderkids,sheremembersthesun,orderkidsjustseethesunduringtheyabouttwoyearsold,andneverseenthesunagain.ThiswhyIfeelstupid. 　　Afteranhour,sunwasdisappearswhichmeanthesummerofVenus'ssummerisend,theygobackinsidethecloset,theyallremembersher.InAllSummerinaDaythethemeissad.TheAllSummerinadayisshortstory,itdidn'thavemanythingcanwelearn,justcanuseteachoursreadingandlanguagearts. 　　Inthisstory,youcansit,don'tthinkanything.Insummer,Margotbeinglockthecloset,buttheywaslookthesunplayhide-andseek,runaroundofplayground,theyarehappy,butMargot'sheartiscrying. 　　Daybyday,yearbyyear,Magortneedwaitordersevenyearandtwo2,556day,alongtimetoseethesunandsummer.Thestoryisshortjustabout550words,butisagoodstory,differentASummerTragedy,twoshortstoriesallaboutthesummer,butoneisshowdifferences,oneistragedyofsummer.