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帮帮改作文MyViewsonMobilePhone要求1平时你用手机做什么2假设没有手机你会做什么3如何合理的使用手机下面是我写的,求指错啊,求修改,MyViewsonMobilePhoneWiththedevelopmentofsocietyandtechnolog
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MyViewsonMobilePhone
要求1平时你用手机做什么
2假设没有手机你会做什么
3如何合理的使用手机
下面是我写的,求指错啊,求修改,
MyViewsonMobilePhone
Withthedevelopmentofsocietyandtechnology,moreandmorepeopleownthemobilephone.Iliketowatchthenewsandlistenthemusicbymobilephoneinnormaltimes.Ofcourse,it’sveryfunnytochatwithfriendsonlinewhenIhavesparetime.
IfIhaven’tmobilephone,Iamwillingtoreadsomebooksinthelibraryandtakepartinmoreactivities.inaddition,thereisnodoubtthatdoingsomesportsisalsoagoodchoice.
AsfarasIamconcerned,wecanusethemobilephonetogetmoreknowledgeonlineandcommunicatewithothersintime.However,weshouldn’tspendtoomuchtimeonmobilephone.Mobilephoneisjustatoolthatwecanusetomeetourneedsinthelife.
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Withthedevelopmentofsocietyandtechnology,moreandmorepeopleownthemobilephone.Iliketo【watch改为read】thenewsandlisten【加to】themusic【by改为on】themobilephonein【加my】【...
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