前面可以改一改 　　Howtomakeourschoolmorebeautiful?Ihaveafewsuggestions: 　　One.Ithinkweshouldvigorouslypromotethestudentstobeacivilizedpeople.Nospitting,nolittering,garbageshouldbeplacedinthetrash. 　　Second,Ithinkweshouldorganizeateamtoplanttreesoncampus,sothatschoolsbecomegreenerandmorebeautiful. 　　Third,Ithinkweshouldtakeseriouslythedutyofhealtheachtimeandkeeptheschoolshaveagoodhealth. 　　Ibelievethatifweworkhard,theschoolwillbemorebeautiful. 　　怎样让我们学校更美丽呢?我有几个建议: 　　一.我觉得我们应该大力提倡同学们做一名文明人.不随地吐痰、不乱扔垃圾、有垃圾要放到垃圾桶. 　　二、我觉得我们应该组织同学们在校园里植树、让学校变得更绿化更美丽. 　　三、我觉得我们应该认真对待每一次的卫生值日、时刻保持着学校有良好的卫生. 　　我相信、只要我们肯努力、学校一定会更美丽的.

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