字典翻译 问答 小学 作文 新三23课作文求批改TheeffortsLookingaround,wecouldfindsnailsalmosteverywhere:onwalls,ontheceiling,oreveninthecoatpockets.Itwasobviouslythatthesnailshadjustescapedfromthepaperbagandtookalongstrollintheroom.'D
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新三23课作文求批改TheeffortsLookingaround,wecouldfindsnailsalmosteverywhere:onwalls,ontheceiling,oreveninthecoatpockets.Itwasobviouslythatthesnailshadjustescapedfromthepaperbagandtookalongstrollintheroom.'D
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新三23课作文求批改

Theefforts

Lookingaround,wecouldfindsnailsalmosteverywhere:onwalls,ontheceiling,oreveninthecoatpockets.Itwasobviouslythatthesnailshadjustescapedfromthepaperbagandtookalongstrollintheroom.'Dearme!'Robertsaidwithashock,'Itseemsthattherewillbeagreatjobtodo!'

RobertandImadeeveryeffortstocollectthesesmallcreaturesintosomebottlestoavoidthem.Wecouldnotreachsomeofthethemontheceiling,sowebroughttwoladdersandwenttothetopofitthencaughtthesnailswithgloves.Wealsousedbranchesandtriedtostickthesnailsbyaspecialtypeofglue.Thoughthesnailswascreepingslowly,Itstilltookusaverylongtimetocollectthem,forwehadtocheckandmarkeverycorner.

Atlast,thejobhasbeendone.RobertwasamusedabouttheexperienceandheaskedmeifIwereabletoleaveandeatthesnailswithhim.Withagreatdealoftiredness,Irefusedtofacethemanymoreandlefthimcookinginthekitchen.Robert,however,hadthemealalone.Sincethen,Ihaveneverbeenabletolookatasnail.

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