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【…………在线修改英语作文DearCathy,Iheardyourfamilyarebusyandyourchildrenaregreat.That'sgood.ButIreallyworryyourchildren'shealth.Ithinkyoushouldn'tgiveyourchildrenmuchpressure.Theyshouldhavefreetimetorelax.D】
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…………在线修改英语作文
DearCathy,
Iheardyourfamilyarebusyandyourchildrenaregreat.That'sgood.ButIreallyworryyourchildren'shealth.Ithinkyoushouldn'tgiveyourchildrenmuchpressure.Theyshouldhavefreetimetorelax.Doyouunderstand?Everyonewillfeeltried.So,theyneedsomefreetimetodosomethingstheywanttodo.
DrAliceGreen
田海林回答：
你真是有自知之明.喜欢你的虚心态度.这封信总的来说还是不错的,主要是须注意英语表达往往没有那么直接,像教训孩子或中国学生似的.尤其是“Doyouunderstand?”是很伤人的,很可能会造成反作用.可改写得婉转含蓄些,最...
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