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关于这篇作文的改错,谢谢IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinTianjinyet.Iwastheninaschoolfo...关于这篇作文的改错,谢谢IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinTianjinyet.IwastheninaschoolforstudensfromTibet.Aswewerealllefthomeatearlyage,wem
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关于这篇作文的改错,谢谢IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinTianjinyet.Iwastheninaschoolfo...
关于这篇作文的改错,谢谢IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinTianjinyet.IwastheninaschoolforstudensfromTibet.Aswewerealllefthomeatearlyage,wemetlotsofproblemsinourdailylife.Wehadtodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyus.However,weseldomfeltlonelyorhelplessly.Weenjoyedourhappylife.Atweekends,wewouldplaybasketball,swimminginthepoolorgoforapicnic.Wewerelivinginabigfamily.Wetreateachotherasbrothersandsisters.Ifanyoneofushadanydifficultyinourlifeandstudy,theotherwouldhelphimour.Ithasbeenfiveyearswhenwegraduated,butthosememoriesareassweetaseverbefore.
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IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinTianjinyet.（去掉yet）IwastheninaschoolforstudensfromTibet.Aswewerealllefthomeatearlyage,（改为Aswealllefthomeatanearlyage）wemetlotsofproblemsinourdailylife....
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