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初一修改英语文章Ihaveagoodplanforwintervacation.everyday,Iusuallygetupat9:30.Iuauallyeatabigbreakfastat9:40.thenIreadabookat10:00.Atnoon,Iusuallyeatabiglunch.thenIplayfootballintheparkat1:00.Isometime
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初一修改英语文章
Ihaveagoodplanforwintervacation.everyday,Iusuallygetupat9:30.Iuauallyeatabigbreakfastat9:40.thenIreadabookat10:00.Atnoon,Iusuallyeatabiglunch.thenIplayfootballintheparkat1:00.Isometimesgotothegymafterpark.thenIdomyhomeworkat3:30.Ialwaysplaythecomputergameat5:00.thenIeatadinner.Intheevening,IuauallywatchTV.Ialwaysreadbooksbeforebed.thenIgotobedat10:00.
Buttodayisdifferentfromtheuaualday.Becauseit'sSpringFestival!I'mgettingupat8:00.I'mwaitingforthebusandlisteningtothemusicat8:30.I'mtakingNO.3bustomygrandperents'house.I'mplayingwithmybrothersandsistersinmygrandperents'house.thenI'mhavingaverybiglunchat12:00.Intheafternoon,I'mgoingtothemuseumatthe1:30.I'mwatchingmanybeautifulthings.thenI'mgohome.I'mveryhappynow!
大家看看这篇文章有什么错误?语法对不对?
石火生回答：
I和sometimes换一下位置.不要用usually.因为你是计划.用planto.语法倒是还好.就是文章没什么特色.I'mwatchingmanybeautifulthings.thenI'mgohome.这句.不是gohome.是gobackhome.你初一的水平.已经不错了.
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