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Whatchangeswillthe21stcenturybring?Peopleseldomagreewitheachothersonsuchsubjectivequestionthathardlycanwefindanoptimalperspectivetoconvinceall.Somepeoplebelieveitisfreshviewsornewelementsofideologywillplayakeyroleinthenewcentury,fortheassimilateeffectsofglobalization.However,somepeoplemaintainthatthechangesinenvironmentwillbemostnotable,sincewehavedamageourcircumstancesomuch,andgradually,peoplerealizestheimportanceofenvironment.Thisopinionjustcoincidewiththatofmine.

LifewithoutgoodenvironmentjustlikestheGardenofEdenwithoutgloriousflower.Peoplecaneasilyproducemachinetosimplifyourlives,buthardlytomakeourearthbecamewhatitwas.Theproblemwearefacingisthatourqualityoflivesisdeclined,andwehavetodosomethingwithit.Currently,wesee,Carsismakingpoisonsforflowersandfosterswhilefactoriesisproducingkillerstobirdsandfishes.Nevercanwedenytheeffectsthatourenvironmentwasdevastated.Everyvacation,myfamilyhastogotomountain,ifwewanttoseestarsandbreathnormalair.ThankstoGod,peoplerealizetheresultofourproblematicdevelopment,andisundergoingtherelativeworks.

Anotherreasonisthattheoutcomesofthe“non-environmentalfriendly”developmentnotonlyconcernthesurroundingsofdailylife,butalsojeopardizethereallylifeitselfofpeople.Suchastheoldandtheyoung,themostvulnerablepart.Resistingharmfulemissionsisn'taeasytaskfortheirbody.Afterall,it’sbadfornormalpeopleaswell.Ontheotherhand,somestrangediseases,astheresultofthat,appearmuchmorefrequentlythaneversince.Ergo,doachangeinenvironmentisn'tsomecanbewaited,butsomethingemergent!

Asmentionedabove,environment,inmyview,ismostlikelytobebroughtinthisnewcentury.Ibelievethatenvironmentshouldbesomethingofpeople,bypeople,andforpeople,andIbelievethatthechangewillcomesoon.