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帮我检查一下这篇英语作文ASurveyonStudents'DietRecentlyIdidasurveyonStudents'Diet.LinLiwhosefavoriteissweetfood,Shesaysthatitcanmakeherhappy.WangMingwhosefavoriteisthefoodwithhighfat,hethinksitisdelicio
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帮我检查一下这篇英语作文
ASurveyonStudents'Diet
RecentlyIdidasurveyonStudents'Diet
.LinLiwhosefavoriteissweetfood,Shesaysthatitcanmakeherhappy.WangMingwhosefavoriteisthefoodwithhighfat,hethinksitisdelicious.AndZhangDan'sfavoriteisfastfood,forit'sconvenienthethinks.ZhaoHuiwhosefavoritesarevegetablesandfruit,becausehebelievesvegetablesandfruitaregoodtohishealth.IthinkonlyZhaoHui'sisgood.Becausefoodwithhighfatcancauseillnesseasily,sweetfoodisbadforourteeth,fastfoodisbadforourhealth.
Accordingtothesurveyabove,Weshouldchoosehealthyfoodinsteadofanythingthatwelike
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改：1.forit'sconvenienthethinks-------forhebelievesitconvenient2.vegetablesandfruitaregoodto(to改为for)hishealth.3.sweetfoodisbadforourteeth,（加and)fastfoodisbad...逗号...
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