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研究生课程,要求是选一个题目写一段话,要有明确的主题,叙述和总结,我选的题目是WhyIneedtoownahouse
下面是我的文章,
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WhyIneedtoownahouse
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WhenIwasyoung,myparentsmovedhousetoomanytimeswhichresultedthatIhaveneverbeenlivinginaplaceforlongerthan3yearsandIinstinctivelyhaveastrongimpulsetoownahouseofmyown.
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EverytimeIwenttoabrandnewplace,Ilostalmostallmyformerfriendsandfuzzybutimpressivememories.Ineededtogettoknowsomenewpeople,atthetimethatIdidn'tknowIwouldnotseethemyearslater,thisseemssoincomprehensibletoakidwhenthinkingback.Irealizedthattooflowinglifejustlikesaquickmealthatyouwillneverknowwhothechefis.Thebestlifeshouldbesettledandpeaceful,inwhichIcanimmerseintothehappinesstostaywithmyfamiliarthingsinsteadofthesenseofdistancewhenI'mfacingallstrangestuffs.IneedtolivewithpeopleIlikeinsteadofthosewhoIhavetobecautiousto,IneedtoliveinaspaceexistinginawayIdesigninsteadofaroomalwayslikestheappearanceIfirstsawit,IneedtoliveasIliketosomeextentinsteadofconstantlyadjustingthesurroundings.
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AhouseDoesn'tmakeahome,butahomecan'tdowithoutahouse.