某英文杂志刊登了一则以“ChangesaboutOurCity”为主题的征文启事,请你谈一谈你眼中的城市的变化,并展望城市的未来。80词左右。
审题思路
1.本文以变化为主题。
2.描述过去:usedtobe…oldhousesthestreetswerenarrow...
3.现在的变化:tallbuildingsthestreetsarewideandclean
4.展望未来:...
写作提醒
1.谈家乡的变化时,需注意用一般过去时描述过去的样子。
2.谈变化时应用现在完成时。
3.展望未来时应用一般将来时。
常用表达
1.MyhometownCangzhouusedtobeaverysmalltown.
2.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinrecentyears.
3.Thereisalsoastreetinthecenterofthecityforpeopletotakewalksorgoshopping.
4.PeoplearelivingamodernlifeandCangzhouhasbecomeamoderncity.
连句成篇
根据题目要求及要点,运用作文模板,在横线上填上适当的内容。
MyhometownCangzhou averysmalltown.Thereweremanyoldhousesandthestreetswerenarrowanddirty.Peoplewenttoworkeitherbybikeoronfoot.Theytookbuseswhentheywenttraveling.
have inrecentyears.Manytallbuildingshavebeenbuiltinthecityandthestreetsarewideandclean.Thereisalsoastreet forpeopletotakewalksorgoshopping.Moreandmorepeoplehavetheirowncarssothattheycangoanywhereconveniently(方便地).Peopleare andCangzhouhasbecomeamoderncity.
InthefutureanewrailwaystationwillbebuiltinCangzhou.Wecantaketrainswhenwegotootherplaces.Therewillbeanewparkandanewgymtoo.Peoplecantakeexerciseinthemorningandgetrelaxedthere.
WhatagreatcityCangzhouwillbe!