问题标题：
【看下这封信有没有语法错误给一个老外写的,帮忙看看先```谢谢了Dearfriend:CanicallyouRico?Maybeit'syourname.I;mthechinesewhohadtalkwithyouinOmegle,I'msorryichangetheemailagainandagain,itisbecauseiwas】
问题描述：
看下这封信有没有语法错误
给一个老外写的,帮忙看看先```谢谢了
Dearfriend:
CanicallyouRico?Maybeit'syourname.I;mthechinesewhohadtalkwithyouinOmegle,I'msorryichangetheemailagainandagain,itisbecauseiwasworryaboutthatcanyougotmyemailifiuseothersemail.Infinal,ichosethe163.com.
NowIwanttogoonourtopic--theTibettopic.Butidon'tknowwhat'syourgovermenttoldyou.so,placereplaythisletterandtoldmewhatdoyouknowaboutTibet,iwanttoknowwhatwasyourgovermenttoldyou,thankyou!
Postscript:Myenglishisnotverygood,ifihadanywrongwithgrammer,placetellme.Iwanttoimprovemyenglishbythisway.
万寿庆回答：
首先请将你信中的i都改为I.
句首的can改为could比较委婉.
english应为English.
Maybeit'syourname.这句话相当不礼貌,改为Isupposeit'syourname.
I;m标点是错的
E-mailaddress意思更清晰
……Iwasworriedabouttharyoucouldnotgetmyemail……
theTibettopic改为onTibet意思是关于西藏
Infinal,这是错的,应为Finally
governmenttoldthepublic.应是告诉公众,而不是你这位朋友,难道他是政府官员?
verywell,ifIhadsomethingwrongwithgrammar.
最后一句最好换成Bestwishes.应为外国人是很讨厌你利用他是为了提高你的英语水平,这是很不尊重很不礼貌的行为.
希望你的英文会有很大进步!
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