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要求：PersonalStatement:Thisisabriefessayaboutwhoyouare,whatyou'vedoneoraccomplished,andwhatyourgoalsareforthefuture.
作文：Iamagirlborninasmallcity.TheyearIwas18,IleftmyhometownandcametoabigcitywhereIamgoingtostudyandspentmyfive-yearcampuslifethere.Ihavelearnttodoeverythingbymyselfandenjoygoodrelationshipwithclassmatesinthecollege,whichIusedtobesomuchworriedabout.Bemoreconfidentandindependent,IreallylookforwardtoenjoyingacampuslifeinAmerica.There’snodoubtthatI’lllearnmuchmorefromthefriendlypeopleandculturetherewhereisneitherinmyhometownnormycountry.
ImajorinUrbanPlanninginmyuniversity,whichisadreamformewhenIwasyoung.Itrymybesttolearnmoreaboutit,anddoprettywellinarchitecture.Inaddition,Ireallygoforinartdesigningandpainting.Theinterestsandhard-workinghelpmegetthefirstpriceinadesigningcompetition.WhenIlearntthatmydreamingsubject,LandscapeArchitectureisjustavailableinUCDavis,Iwassohappy.
UrbanPlanningisasubjectrequiresvariousknowledge,scienceandart,internalandexternal.AndifIgetthechancetogoabroadmeansIgetthechancetoknowmore.It’scertainthattherichexperiencewillhelpagirlgetclosertohergoal,whichistobeaqualifiedexpertinUrbanPlanning.Inthenearfuture,Iplantoputmyknowledgeintopractice.TeachersandBooksteachmewhatothercountriesdowithcitydevelopment,butIneverreallyknowwhatitislike.SoduringthetimeIstudyabroad,IwanttocompleteacognitivemapofUCDavis,haveastudyofimagespaceonsmallscale.