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Thegovernmentshouldpayforpeople'seducationandhealthcare.Towhatectentdoyouagreeordisagree?
正文：
Educationand
healtharehighonthegovernment’sagenda.Somepeopleholdtheviewthatthe
governmentshouldpayforcitizen’seducationandhealthcare.Iampartlyfor
it.
Therearethree
mainreasons.Firstly,alargeofproportionofgovernmentrevenuecomesof
taxespaidbycitizens.Thereforeeachtaxpayerhastherighttomakefree
healthandeducationprovidedbystate.Secondly,theremustbemanypeoplewho
cannotaffordtheeducationandhealthcareineverycountry.Aimingtolet
everyindividualhavethesamerighttobealive,thegovernmentshouldrelieve
theeducationandhealthburdenofunderprivileged,whichcanhelpgovernment
tosafeguardsocialstability.Thirdly,internationalcompetitionis
increasinglyfierceineconomyfieldtoday.People’seducationandhealthlevel
isasignificantfactoraffectingtheeconomydevelopment.Byprovidingfree
educationanhealthcare,thegovernmentcanpromotethecompetitivenessofa
country’sworkforce.
However,the
governmentshouldnotpayalltheeducationandhealthcare,becausethe
limitedgovernmentreceiptsshouldbepaidinmanyotherfields,i.e.economy,
technology,infrastructure,nationaldefenseandthesameas.Socitizens
shouldtakeapartoftheresponsibilityoftheirowneducationandhealth
care.Meanwhile,thegovernmentshouldkeepareasonablebalancebetweenthe
citizens’educationandhealthcareneedandotherfinancialexpenditure.
Inaword,the
governmentshouldprovidefreeeducationandhealthcareforthepoorpeople
andputupalargepartofthosefortheother.Andthegovernmentshouldalsoimplement
aproperwelfaresystemtoreducethesocialunrest.