英文作文改错

希望把这几段改对了,或者写的更合适

Inthelifetherearemanypeopledoingdifferentjob.Everyjobisimportantinthelife,someonewillchangetheircareer,whatdoyouthinkthereasonsmightbeforthat?Iguessbecauseabouttheirinterest,theyneedgetmoreandmoremoneyandmostimportantreasonistheirfamily.

Frist,interestinthejob,thatiswhatsomeonelikesaboutthisjob.Ithinkapersonwhoisinterestedinhisjobwillbedoit/.Hecanhaveagoodmoodeveryday,hecanalsofinishtheworkbetter.Evidentinterestcanbecomeadrivingfore.

Secondly,theyneed/getmoreandmoremoney.Withtheremarkableimprovementofpeople’slivingstandard,theyneedmoreandmoremoneyinhislife.Welivewithfoodandclothinglinecannotdowithoutmoneyinordertogetmoremoney,theymaychooseajobforabetter.

Final,Ithinkmostimportantistheirfamily.Everyonehasafamily,somepeopleinorderto/familytochangetheirjob,theythinkfamilyismostimportant.,thejobissecond/important.Ithinkthisbecausetheyenjoyfamilytime,Familymemberscanbringthemhappiness.Moneyisnoteverythingandmoneycannotbuyhappiness.

Tosumup,everyonehastheirreasontochangetheircareer.Maybereasonhaveinterest,moneyandfamily,butIthinkeveryworkisimportant.Only/theylovetheirwork,Ibelivetheywillhaveagoodlife.