请帮我看下这篇英语作文有没有问题!

Itmaybealittlebrusqueformetowritethislettertoyou.

But...

beacuseoftodayismybirthday,

Iwanttoconveymymoodonthisday...

BychanceIkowyou.Ilikeyourmusicandvoice

Itsoundswonderfulanditcangivemepower.

Onmysparetime,IreadyourblogthoughIdon'tfullyunderstand.

ButIamverygladtoyoucansharesomethingaboutyouwithfans.

Itcanhelpmekonwmoreaboutyou.

IwanttoseeyourlivethatIcanfeelthecharmofyouinJapan.

You'rethemotiveforcetokeepmegoforward.

I'mnotgottathinkofthepossibilitywhetherIwillbesuccessful.

Ihopemydreamwillcometruesomeday.

IthinkI'lltrymybesttodo.

Ifyoucanreplytome.ItmustbethebestgiftthatI'vereceived.

Last,pleasekeepyourstruggleallalong.

I'llsupportyouforever!

（Iamnotgoodatjapanese.So...andexcusemeforanymistakessincemypoorEnglish.）

请认真仔细地帮我查看一下吧,希望能有真心的朋友帮助我,因为这篇作文真的是非常重要啊!而且我想把这篇作文写得委婉有礼貌一下,可惜各种有心无力,如果有什么建议的请提出来,我会感谢你们的出手相助的~

==其实我已经修改完毕了。囧