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【求高手批改雅思作文!顺便看看能拿多少分吧嘻嘻Constanly,children'seducationalmethodsarearguingbyus.Atpresent,astaggeringrateofcompetitionexistinthesocietyandhowtonuturechildreninaproperwaybecomesveryessen】
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求高手批改雅思作文!顺便看看能拿多少分吧嘻嘻
Constanly,children'seducationalmethodsarearguingbyus.Atpresent,astaggeringrateofcompetitionexistinthesocietyandhowtonuturechildreninaproperwaybecomesveryessentialthaneverbefore.Someoneholdstheiropinionsthatchildrenshouldbetorturedcompetitionawarenessinordertomakethemmoreexcellent.Others,however,holdsthattheyneedtoacquireskillsabouthowtocooperatemorethancompete.
鲁洪喜回答：
建议你到新东方批改网上改改,都是外教改的至今为止,精批大作文一篇,细批大作小作文各一篇~除了批改打分,还有范文什么的,老师也很尽心,由于是我第一篇批改的作文,于是分数很低（正常）,经过老师批改后发现了自己的问...
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