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谁能帮我看一下,下面100字里面有没有语法错误?Recently,moreandmorepeopleareinterestedintherelationshipbetweensocio-economicfactorsandsuccessinlife.Infact,successinlifeisnotonlytheachievementofsomethingaperso
问题描述：
谁能帮我看一下,下面100字里面有没有语法错误?
Recently,moreandmorepeopleareinterestedintherelationshipbetweensocio-economicfactorsandsuccessinlife.Infact,successinlifeisnotonlytheachievementofsomethingapersonattemptbutalsoreceivetherespectinsociety.Somepeopleadvocatethatsocio-economicfactorscontrolsuccessinlife,whileothersdon’tagree.Itisarguedherethatsocialandeconomicfactorsarereallynecessaryelementtosuccessinlife.InICTarea,thereasonsforthisrelatetosupportfromsociety,obtaininghelpfromfinanceandredoundupontosociety.
如果有的话,怎么改?
路晖回答：
Recently,moreandmorepeoplearegettinginterestedintherelationshipbetweensocio-economicfactorsandsuccessinlife.Infact,asuccessfullifenotonlyimprovespoeple'ssocialstatus,butalsobacomesanenternalpursuitinone'slife.Somepeopleadvocatethatsocio-economicfactorscontrolsuccessinlife,whileothersdon’tagree.Theyarguedifsocialandeconomicfactorsarereallynecessaryelementsthatcanleadtoasuccessfullife.InICTarea,thereasonsforthisrelatetosupportfromsociety,obtaininghelpfromfinanceandredoundupontosociety.
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