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求英语学霸帮忙看看这篇文章有没有语法错误QAAAAAA【在线等!TheeducationofCodeofconductinChinaandForeigncountriesSomeresearchesshowthatmanypeopleinchinaprefertheeducationofcodeofconductinsomeforeigncoun
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求英语学霸帮忙看看这篇文章有没有语法错误QAAAAAA【在线等!
TheeducationofCodeofconductinChinaandForeigncountries
SomeresearchesshowthatmanypeopleinchinaprefertheeducationofcodeofconductinsomeforeigncountriessuchasAmericaandBritain.Theythinkthattheeducationofthecodeofconductinthosecountriesismoresuitableandspecific.Andtheythinkthoserulesinchinaishardformiddleschoolstudentstounderstand.Theseopinionsandtrueinaway,butwecan’tconcludefromtheseopinionsthattheeducationofcodeofconductinChinaisuseless.Ithinkourmiddleschoolstudentscanunderstandtheserulesthoroughlyandobeytheserulesstrictly.
Inmyopinion,wecanreadtheregulationsintheforeigncountriesforreferenceandhelpusunderstandourrulesbetter.
胡桂珍回答：
什么是educationofCodeofconduct?意思含糊CodeofConduct的意思很重,请看如下：Acodeofconductisasetofrulesoutliningtheresponsibilitiesof,orproperpracticesfor,anindividual,partyororg...
耿宝回答：
想表达的是学生行为规范教育的意思那后面加上forstudents会不会明确一点？
胡桂珍回答：
那是StudentConductEducation及RulesOfStudentConduct
第二句不该用suitable，建议用receptivebythestudents.
第二句已用theythink作开始，那第三句就不宜再用，建议改为Middleschoolstudentsfindtheserulesdifficulttounderstand.
第四句Theeducation....isuseless。Useless用得不当，该用worthless。前半建议改为Whilethesereasonsaresound,but....
末句建议改为Inmyopinion,thestudentconducteducationimplementedbythewesterncountriescanbeusedasreferencetoimproveours.
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