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【帮我检查一下这量两篇英语口语作文有没有什么错误:Readingbookismyoneoffavouritehobby.Theymakemeknowalotofthingintheworld.Sometimesreadingbookmakemefeelhappy.Butsomesadstorymakemecry.Ilikereadingbook】
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帮我检查一下这量两篇英语口语作文有没有什么错误:
Readingbookismyoneoffavouritehobby.Theymakemeknowalotofthingintheworld.Sometimesreadingbookmakemefeelhappy.Butsomesadstorymakemecry.Ilikereadingbookwithanimals.Ioftenbuymanybookinthebookshopandreadingbookinthelibrary.
LastSunday,myparentsandIwasgoingtozhepark.Weplayedveryhappy.Andthen,myparentsfelttiredandsatunderthetree.AndIplaythehoolahoop.Suddenly,Isawapolicemanwantedtocatchathief,hefelldownandthepolicemantookheaway.Beforethepolicemanleft,hesaidtome"Youareabravechild!"
第二篇第三行漏了一句，从这里开始“Suddenly,Isawapolicemanwantedtocatchathief,andthethiefrantome,Ihadn'ttimetothink,throwghedthehoolahoopatthethief,hefelldown........
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第一篇:Readingbookisoneofmyfavouritehobbies.Theymakemeknowalotofthingsintheworld.Sometimesreadingbookmakemefeelhappy,butsomesadstoriesmakemecry.Ilikereadingbookwithanimals.Ioftenbuymanybooksinthebookshopandreadingtheminthelibrary.
第二篇:LastSunday,myparentsandIwenttothepark.Weplayedveryhappy.Andthen,myparentsfelttiredandsatunderthetree.AndIplayedthehoolahoop.Suddenly,Isawapolicemanwantedtocatchathief,andthethiefrantome,Ihadn'ttimetothink,andthrowghedthehoolahoopatthethief,thenhefelldownandthepolicemantookheaway.Beforethepolicemanleft,hesaidtome"Youareabravechild!"
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