应该说你很会考试,至少在模式上,所以文章看起来中规中矩.文章切题,但第一段比较模式化,关键是第三段论证的很仓促,不令人信服,论证清楚才是至少得到6分的基础,另外要稍微加大难度单词和复杂句式的添加.多看看范文,掌握高分作文的特点也很重要!此文是5.5分 　　Thereismuchdebatesurroundingtheissueofuniversitygraduatesbeingpaidmoresalarythanthosewhohaveneverbeentouniversityforfurthereducations.Itendtoagreewiththisstatementtoalargeextendthatpayingmoremoneytowell-educatedworkersisjustified. 　　Tobeginwith,universitygraduatescontributemoretooursocietythantheirless-educatedpeersboththeoreticallyandpractically.Unlilkethepracticalskillsthatcouldbelearntthroughgeneralwork,thetheoreticalknowledge,whichisthedrivingforcebehindtheproductivity,couldonlybeacquiredviauniversityeducation.Infact,theuniversitystudentsshouldapplythemselvesandworkhardatschooltograspwhattheyaresuppose/supposedtolearn,andeventuallyapply/这个单词比较重复,可以改成理论联系实际linktheorytopracticetheirtheoreticalknowldgeintopracticetoboosttheindustrialproductivity.Therefore,theireffortsshouldbehighlightedbygavenfinancialsupportintermsoftheircontributiontotheoreticalandpracticaldevelopments. 　　However,somepeoplemayarguethatitisunjustifiedthataperson'sstandardofincomeshouldjustbedecidedsimplely/simplybasedonhisorherstandardofeducation.And,thisisoftentruethatapersonwhohasneverstudiedatuniversitystillcanbeaprofessorathisorherjobandthenearnhighsalary.Ipersonallythinkonlyafewpeoplecanachievethetopoftheirprofessionswithoutuniversityeducation.Iftheydoachieveit,theysurelyshouldbehighlypaid. 　　Inconclution,agoodpaymentfortheuniversitygraduates,Ithink,isreasonable.Inaddition,theless-educatedworkersshouldalsohavethesametreatmentaslongashisorhercontributionisasvaluedashisorherwell-educatedcolleagues.