字典翻译 问答 小学 作文 myhome作文Myhomeislargecleanandbeatuful.Fisrt,Italkingaboutmylivingroom.Openthedoor,youcanseethewhitesofainthemiddleofthelivingroom.Thesofaisverypliancy、newness,youknow,Thisseatismorecomfortabletositon..Ifiw
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myhome作文Myhomeislargecleanandbeatuful.Fisrt,Italkingaboutmylivingroom.Openthedoor,youcanseethewhitesofainthemiddleofthelivingroom.Thesofaisverypliancy、newness,youknow,Thisseatismorecomfortabletositon..Ifiw
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myhome作文

Myhomeislargecleanandbeatuful.Fisrt,Italkingaboutmylivingroom.Openthedoor,youcanseethewhitesofainthemiddleofthelivingroom.Thesofaisverypliancy、newness,youknow,Thisseatismorecomfortabletositon..

IfiwasthetiredorIwasthesick,imustlivdownthesofaisrest.Thereisatelevisioninthefrontofsofa,Ithinkyouaskmethetelevisionisbrand?it’sfromamerica.ThereisbookcaseontheleftoftheTV.therearesomebooksmagazinesnewspapersandtherefloweronthebookcase.theflowerisartificial,butveryverisimilitude.Therearegreencarpetonthefloor,thecarpetlooklikeagrassplotit’sveryentertainingTherearesomebluepaperonthewall.TheBluepaperandgreencarpetislooklikeapicture.Whatwhere,Ilovemyhomeandmyparentssomuch!Althoughthissentenceisout!but,Ibelieveeverbodyloveselfhome!

Last,blessmyclassmatesohappyeveryday

这是我的一片作文,估计有很多语病,

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  第一行:large后加逗号;fisrt写错了,应为first,这句话语法有错,可写为:I‘dliketotalkaboutmylivingroom.Openingthedoor第二行:very后应加形容词另,pliancy是柔顺的意思,此举可改为isverysoftandnew第四行,由于这个是真实条件句,可写为ifiamtiredorsick,icansitinthesofatohavearest第五行:ithinkyoumayaskmethetelevision'sbrand第六行:therearesomeflowersonthe.第七行:thereisagreencarpet.thecarpetlookslike第八行:therearesomegreenpiecesofpaper.thebluepaperandgreencarpetlooklikeapicture.Wharever第十行:去掉but(but和although不能连用)最后一行:blessmyclassmatesbehappyeveryday
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