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请帮忙检查语法错误IoncehadafriendwhonamedBob,butIdonotseehimanymorebecausehisdishonest.Firstofall,helay(撒谎)alot.Forinstance,hetoldhisparentsthathewasstudyingwhenhewasactuallygames.Anotherexamplewashe
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请帮忙检查语法错误
IoncehadafriendwhonamedBob,butIdonotseehimanymorebecausehisdishonest.Firstofall,helay(撒谎)alot.Forinstance,hetoldhisparentsthathewasstudyingwhenhewasactuallygames.Anotherexamplewasheoncetriedtogivemesomekindofdrugwithsayingthatwasjustvitamin.Inaddition,heneverkepthispromisethathemadetopeopleandsometimesevendeniedthem.OnceIneedhimtobringsomethingthatIreallyneedforthenextday,hepromisedthathewould,butusuallyIcannotgetthemontime.Moreover,reallymakememadwas,hesaidthatItoldhimbringtomeonnextweek.Asaresult,wewerenotfriendsanymore
word很多时态等错误查不出的因为老外默认他们不会犯这种错误所以请不要用word
PS，第一句应该是IoncehadafriendwhonamedBob,butIdonotwantseehimanymorebecausehisdishonest.
李天璞回答：
1.Ionce----Oncei
2.idonot----ididn't
3.because----becauseof
4.dishonest----dishonesty
5.helay(撒谎)----helied
6.whenhewas----whilehewas
7.actuallygames----actuallyplayinggames
8.Anotherexamplewashe----Anotherexamplewasthathe
9.sayingthat----sayingit
10.hemade----hehadmade
11.Ineed----Iasked
12.Ireallyneed----Ireallyneeded
13.forthenextday----去掉
14.butusuallyIcannotgetthem----butactuallyIdidn'tgetthem
15.Moreover,reallymakememadwas,hesaidthatItoldhimbringtomeonnextweek.----Moreover,whatreallydrovemesadwasthathesaiditoldhimtobringittomeonthenextweek.(drivesb.mad这一短语搭配更好)
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