问题标题：
帮忙看看这句话语法是否正确?如何改正?later,ifoundagroupthatmembersstayedandcontactedregular.Ibegantohaveasenseofbelongingandabetterunderstandingofmypositionandtask.moreover,theyshareinformationtomeforhel
问题描述：
帮忙看看这句话语法是否正确?如何改正?
later,ifoundagroupthatmembersstayedandcontactedregular.Ibegantohaveasenseofbelongingandabetterunderstandingofmypositionandtask.moreover,theyshareinformationtomeforhelpingmebetterofunderstandingbothontopicandsouces.itismyexperiencewhichrelatetonorningstage.
范乃强回答：
Later,Ifoundagroupofwhichmembersstayedandcontactedregularly.Ibegantohaveasenseofbelongingandabetterunderstandingofmypositionandtask.Moreover,theysharedinformationtohelpmeunderstandbetterbothontopicandsouces.Itismyexperiencewhichisrelatedtonorningstage.
恩改动有点大,不过我觉得这样能够更好.首先第一个句子里如果是定语从句,用that得缺成分,不缺,这里就得用ofwhich,regularly是副词.
share本来是跟with的,这里,为了更简洁明了,用to不定式,这里是改动比较大的,见谅啊.
berelatedeto.
恩不好意思哈为了更符合英语习惯,就改动大了些,不过觉得语言还是不错的,加油啊!
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