问题标题：
【八年级英语作文,关于友谊的作文,ANFORGETABLETHINGeveryonehashiscan'tforgetthing.friendshipmaybethemostimpotantthinginourlife.it'slikealinghtgiveusbright.ihavemarythingsthatican'trorgetwithmyfriends.oneday】
问题描述：
八年级英语作文,关于友谊的作文,
ANFORGETABLETHING
everyonehashiscan'tforgetthing.friendshipmaybethemostimpotantthinginourlife.
it'slikealinghtgiveusbright.ihavemarythingsthatican'trorgetwithmyfriends.
oneday,ishawedanewwatchmybestfriend.thewatchisveryprettyandilikeitverymuch.whenipassedittoher,shedroppeditandthewatchcrashedintopieces.ishcutedtoher.idon'twanttoseeyouagain.shecnedatonceafterschool,ifiundaprettypencilcaseinmydesk.inthepencitcase,ifoundanotewhichsaid:"dearcristine,igavethistoyoubecauseidon'twanttoloseyou.canyouforgiveme?"iwasmovedbythenoteandifeltregrewithmywordsisaidsorrytoherandwewerecloserthanbefore.afriendislikeastarinsky.healwaysistherearoundyouican'tforgetthisthingforever.
彭炎午回答：
句子写得不错,就是有很多拼写错误,另外句首都要大写的.我帮您修改了一下,请对照原文,希望对您有所帮助：
ANUNFORGETTABLETHING
Everyonehashisunforgettablething.Friendshipmaybethemostimpotantthinginourlife.
It'slikealightthatgivesusbrightness.IhavemanythingsthatIcan'tforgetwithmyfriends.
Oneday,Ishowedanewwatchtomybestfriend.ThewatchisveryprettyandIlikeitverymuch.WhenIpassedittoher,shedroppeditandthewatchcrashedintopieces.Ishoutedtoher:Idon'twanttoseeyouagain.Shecriedatonceafterschool.Ifoundaprettypencilcaseinmydesk.Inthepencilcase,Ifoundanotewhichsaid:"DearCristine,IgavethistoyoubecauseIdon'twanttoloseyou.Canyouforgiveme?"IwasmovedbythenoteandIfeltregretwithmywords.Isaidsorrytoherandwewerecloserthanbefore.Afriendislikeastarinthesky.He(She)isalwaystherearoundyou.Ican'tforgetthisthingforever.
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