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Thedigitalage,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,作文标题是:Thedigitalage,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,Withmoreandmoredigitalproductsareusedwidelyinourlife,weenteredthedigitalage.Weusecomputertoprocess
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Thedigitalage,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,
作文标题是:Thedigitalage,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,
Withmoreandmoredigitalproductsareusedwidelyinourlife,weenteredthedigitalage.Weusecomputertoprocessthedocumentsatoffice,wewatchdigitalTVathome,andwelistentoMP3whetherwearetakingthebusesortrains.Itseemsthatweeachdoonethingthatwillalwaysaccompanywiththedigitalproduct.
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Withmoreandmoredigitalproductsareusedwidelyinourlife,we(此处加上：have)entered（加上：into）thedigitalage.Weusecomputertoprocessthedocumentsat(at改为:in)office,wewatchdigitalTVathome,andwelistentoMP3whether(whether改为:when)wearetakingthe(aretakingthe改为：take)busesortrains.Itseemsthatweeachdoonethingthatwillalwaysaccompanywiththedigitalproduct.(最后一句改为：Itseemsthatforeachthingwedo,thedigitalproductwillalwaysaccompanywithus.)
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