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请各位大侠帮我看看我的作文有没有语法错误!小弟感激不禁!Istillremembertheteacheroncesaid"thedreamwasn'tideal,dreamwasimpossibletoachieve."ButIhavetoworktowardsthisgoodahead.In2010,Iunderstandingapopular
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请各位大侠帮我看看我的作文有没有语法错误!小弟感激不禁!
Istillremembertheteacheroncesaid"thedreamwasn'tideal,dreamwasimpossibletoachieve."ButIhavetoworktowardsthisgoodahead.
In2010,Iunderstandingapopularandfamousartist.sheisRihanna,andconstantlyunderstandingher.The54thGrammyAwardswereheldonFebruary12,2012.RihannawontwoGrammyAwards.AGrammyAwardsequivalenttomusiccirclesofOscar.Ithink:thisisagreathonor.Ilookatmyidolonstange.Ialsowantedtowinningtheprize.BecomethefirstChinesetotheGrammyAward.So,Ialwaysfortheimpossiblestuggle.
Mydreamisbecomingaoutstandingartist!
Ofcourse,impossibledream,somepeoplewillrealize.
第一句的impossible后面没有打空格，是impossibleto
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Istillremembertheteacheroncesaid"thedreamwasn'tideal,itwasimpossibletoachieve."ButIhavetoworktowardsthisgoodahead（这里不知道你想表达什么,反正这一句是错的）.
In2010,Iheardaboutapopularandfamousartist,Rihanna.AndIknewquitealotabouther.The54thGrammyAwardswasheldonFebruary12,2012andRihannawontwoGrammyAwards.TheGrammyAwardsinthemusiccirclesisequivalenttoOscarinthemovieindustry,soIthinkthisisagreathonor.Ilookedatmyidolonthestange,andalsowantedtowintheprize,becomingthefirstChinesetogetGrammyAward.Ialwaysfortheimpossiblestuggle（这一句话也是错的,也不知道你想表达什么）.
Mydreamisbecominganoutstandingartist!
Ofcourse,impossibledream,somepeoplewillrealize.（这一句话也是）
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