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大家看看我写的上海中考英语作文能得几分?I'mamemberofAnimalLoversThereisnodoubtthatalotofanimalswilldisappearsoonifwegoonhunting.I'mamemberofAnimalLovers.myjobistopreventpeoplefromhuntinganimalsand
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大家看看我写的上海中考英语作文能得几分?
I'mamemberofAnimalLovers
Thereisnodoubtthatalotofanimalswilldisappearsoonifwegoonhunting.I'mamemberofAnimalLovers.myjobistopreventpeoplefromhuntinganimalsandprotecttheeco-system.AsamemberofAnimalLovers,Ifeelextremelyproud.Ihopemorepeoplewilljointhisclubandmorepeoplewillknowtheimportanceofanimals.Careforanimals,andtheearthwillbemorebeautiful.I'mgladtobeamemberofAnimalLovers.
按照上海市中考英语作文评分标准18分能得几分?
邓力回答：
有高级句式的应用,但同样也有幼稚的语言（比如Ihopemorepeoplewilljointhisclubandmorepeoplewillknowtheimportanceofanimals可以用下省略句,改为Ihopemorepeoplewilljointhisclubandknowtheimportanceofanimals这样不啰嗦）但总体可以,满分18的话若判卷不很严格14,15分吧
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