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指点语法错误,Thedigitalage作文标题是:Thedigitalage,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,Thedigitalproductshavechangedthewayofourwork,educationandlifeultimately(还是用completely),Atfirst,duetotheappearofthec
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指点语法错误,Thedigitalage
作文标题是:Thedigitalage,我写了一小段,求指点语法错误,
Thedigitalproductshavechangedthewayofourwork,educationandlifeultimately(还是用completely),Atfirst,duetotheappearofthecomputer,manypositionssuchas:bookkeepers,typistshavebeendisappeared.Atthesametime,thepostionsrelatetothecomputerhaveincreasedrapidly.
Thesecondaspects,thewaywespendourleisurelifehaschangedalot.Wecanplayipadafterdinneroronourwaytowork,wecanchatwithourfirendanytimethroughthesmartmobilephone,wecanstudyenglishbythemobilephonesoftware.
Itishardtoimaginethatalifewithoutdigitalproductsnow.Admitornot,digitalproductshavealteredourdailylife.
姜斌回答：
ultimately这里不是很合适,completely可以,另外还可以用entirely.
duetotheappearing,必须用ing形式作为动名词,其实可以另外写成advancementsofcomputer或者developmentof
职业的话用position不合适,一般用job,你觉得太简单了可以用occupation,还有,不是bedisappeared,这里直接用disappeared,这里没被动关系.
一般手机程序不用software,用application,还有bymobilephoneapplications,虽然语法没错,但是表达总感觉不对,感觉用throughapplicationsofmobilephones好点,或者byusingmobilephones'applications
其他没发现什么大的错误
扶蔚鹏回答：
非常非常感谢,太专业了.另外请问dutto这个to是介词吗?所以后面要用名词?或动名词?
姜斌回答：
是的，其实看to是不是介词，体会下句子的意思很容易能够判断的
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