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高中英语作文修改（速度）,十分感谢TheMid-AutumnFestivalandThanksgivingDayaretwoimportantfestivals,whicharemarkedbyfamilyreunions,toAsianandwesternsrespectively.However,therearemanydifferencesbetweenthem.Just
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高中英语作文修改（速度）,十分感谢
TheMid-AutumnFestivalandThanksgivingDayaretwoimportantfestivals,whicharemarkedbyfamilyreunions,toAsianandwesternsrespectively.
However,therearemanydifferencesbetweenthem.
Justregardingtheirnames,wecanquicklyfindoutthattheMid-AutumnFestivalisnamedbyseasonandThanksgivingbyevent.
WhileAsianenjoydeliciousmoon-cakesandgazeatthemoononMid-AutumnDay,westernshaveturkeyandvariousversionsofcelebrationsinThanksgivingDay.
Whatthepeopleintwohemisphereshaveincommontocelebratetheirfestivalsisenjoyingabigdinnerwithfamilymembers.
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Bothmarkedbyfamilyreunions,Mid-AutumnFestivalandThanksgivingDayaretwoimportantfestivalsaroundworld,,toAsianandwesternsrespectively.
However,therearemanydifferencesbetweenthem.
Justregardingtheirnames,wecaneasilyfindoutthattheMid-AutumnFestivalisnamedbyseasonandThanksgivingbyevent.
WhileAsianenjoydeliciousmoon-cakesandadmirethefullmoononMid-AutumnDay,westernshaveturkeyandvariousversionsofcelebrationsinThanksgivingDay.
Whatthepeoplefromtwohemisphereshaveincommoncelebratingtheirfestival(single.f.),isenjoyingabigdinnerwithfamilymembers.
建议最后加一句话,这样收尾太仓促
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