问题标题：
【请帮忙检查一下这篇英文短文有没有什么错误,Ihadahappysummervacation.IwenttoOlympicsForestPark.WevisitedBeijingNationalStadium.AswesayBird'sNest.It'sveryhugeandbeautiful.IthadheldtheopeningceremonyoftheO】
问题描述：
请帮忙检查一下这篇英文短文有没有什么错误,
Ihadahappysummervacation.IwenttoOlympicsForestPark.WevisitedBeijingNationalStadium.AswesayBird'sNest.It'sveryhugeandbeautiful.IthadheldtheopeningceremonyoftheOlympicGamesandisgoingtoholstheclosingceremonyoftheOlympicGames.IalsovisitedNationalAquaticsCenter.AswesayWaterCube.Itiscolorful.Ilikeitverymuch.AndthenwesawtheGrandFountain.Ifeltveryexcitedandhappythere.
付大鹏回答：
有一些拼写错误,总体没有语法错误,但简单句太多,最好有一些变化
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