字典翻译 问答 小学 作文 【托福作文求评分,指教!therearetimeswhenlyingisacceptable.Thereisakindofliethatisconsideredtobeacceptable.That'sawhitelie.Peopletellwhiteliesintheinterestofothersandwillprobablynotbeblamed.However,Idon'tthink】
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【托福作文求评分,指教!therearetimeswhenlyingisacceptable.Thereisakindofliethatisconsideredtobeacceptable.That'sawhitelie.Peopletellwhiteliesintheinterestofothersandwillprobablynotbeblamed.However,Idon'tthink】
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托福作文求评分,指教!

therearetimeswhenlyingisacceptable.

Thereisakindofliethatisconsideredtobeacceptable.That'sawhitelie.Peopletellwhiteliesintheinterestofothersandwillprobablynotbeblamed.However,Idon'tthinktherearedifferencesbetweenawhitelieandacommonlie.Lyingisnotacceptableatanytime.

Oneofthemostimportantreasonsisthattellingliescausesthelierloseothers'trust.Inmanycases,peoplehavetotellanotherlietocoverupthepreviousone.Thus,nobodycanensurethatalltheliesarewhitelies.Whenotherpeoplefindoutthattheyarecheated,theymaynotbelieveinthatpersonagain.Heenduplosingtrustofpeople,eventhoughhispurposeisgoodinthefirstplace.

Besides,nosecretcanhideforever.Sometimes,peoplewilllietotheirfamiliesorrelativesaboutsomebadnews.Theydon'twantthemtosuffer.However,isitpossiblethattheycanhidethetruthforever?Andhavetheytakenitintoaccountthatthepersonmaybesadderafterfindingthetruth.Therightwayistotellthetruthunderanycircumstanceandletthepersondecidehowtohandleit.

What'smore,tellingliesmayleadtosomesocialproblems.Thereisanexampleofafakephotothatwonawardworldwide.Itturnedouttobeanartificalphoto.Peoplebegantocastdoubtsontheauthorityoftheawardandmoralityofphotographers.Andinaperiodoftime,peoplelostinterestinappreciatingsomemagnificentphotosthatisreal.

Whetherputinthecontextofinterpersonalrelationsorsocialimpact,tellinglies,goodorbad,isnotacceptable.Itmaynotonlyruinaperson'sreputationorcausemoresufferingtoothersbutalsobringsocialproblemstosomeextent.

李擎宇回答:
  有下面两个问题.都比较严重.   1既然是讲whitelie那么第四段就有些不对题意,建议删去改成与文章主题相关的.   2第23段为具体论证,应该举出有说服力的实证例子,可以举自己的,可以是有名的历史事件,你的虽说也举例了,可是很笼统不具体,难得高分.   还有问题可以问我
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