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请英语好一点的哥哥姐姐帮帮我,帮我看看下面这篇文章的错误,并给予详细的纠正Vacationiscoming.i'mreallytiredthesedays.iwanttohavearetaxingvacationinhawali.i'mleavingthefirstweekinJulyandstayinguntil
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请英语好一点的哥哥姐姐帮帮我,帮我看看下面这篇文章的错误,并给予详细的纠正
Vacationiscoming.i'mreallytiredthesedays.iwanttohavearetaxingvacationinhawali.
i'mleavingthefirstweekinJulyandstayinguntilseptemer.i'mplanstohaveaveryrelaxingandinterestingvacation.i'mwalkingonthebeach,collectshells,goingsurfing,planingbeachvolleyball,lieonthebeachandgoingswimming.i'mplanningtospendtimeinthebeautifulbeach.ilovenature.Ihopeicanforgetallmyproblems!Atnight,i'm[仰望星空这个词怎么写?]andsleepingalot.
iwanttoshowyouamyphotoswhenigetbacktoschool.
Oh!Agreatvacation!Ican'twait!
姜先果回答：
lookinguptothestarrysky
retaxing写错了,是relaxing吧
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