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【哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语小日记有没有语法错误看看哪里错了,高三水平的.如果能润色一下,NowcomingthefirstholidaysinceIwenttocollege,thesixmonthsofcollegelifewasmyfirsttripawayfromhometostudya】
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哪位大侠帮我看看这篇英语小日记有没有语法错误
看看哪里错了,高三水平的.如果能润色一下,
NowcomingthefirstholidaysinceIwenttocollege,thesixmonthsofcollegelifewasmyfirsttripawayfromhometostudyallbymyself.
Sixmonthsofcollegelifehavetaughtmealot,SothisiswhatIdreamofuniversitylife,therewerefaintsenseofloss,buttherearemoresurprises,I'vemetalotofnewfriends,andIhasalsoexperiencedalotofimpressivethings.Nowgohome,IwouldliketobeproperlychatwithmyparentsthelifeIhavesixmonthsIhavebeenliving.
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NowcomingthefirstholidaysinceIwenttocollege(.)thesixmonthsofcollegelifewasmyfirsttripawayfromhometostudyallbymyself.Sixmonthsofcollegelife(had)taughtmealot,(and)th...
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