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【就是一篇普通的要求100词的作文,有什么语法错误,或者表达不好的地方,TheImpactofScientificDiscoveriesIn1964,themostfamousdiscoveryinthehistoryofhumanbeinghasbeenbornattheuniversityofPennsylvania.Thatwas】
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就是一篇普通的要求100词的作文,有什么语法错误,或者表达不好的地方,
TheImpactofScientificDiscoveries
In1964,themostfamousdiscoveryinthehistoryofhumanbeinghasbeenbornattheuniversityofPennsylvania.ThatwasthecomputercalledENIAC.Althoughlookedbigandheavy,ENIACbroughtusintothe"ComputerAge"andthen,Itoccurredthesituationthatcomputersappeareverywhereinourlife.
Agreatmanyotherscientificdiscoveriesalsohavelargeimpact.Theyarechangingourlifeallthetime.Inthelast5000years,thehumansocietyexperiencedthechangefrombrutishtocivilization.Thisalldependedonscientificdiscoveries.Newdevelopmentsinscienceandtechnologypromoteourlivingstandard,lengthenourlife,enrichourentertamentsandmakeusgoastepfurthertoachievemoredevelopements.Sowecan'tleavescientificdiscoveries,unlesswewanttodestroyourselves.
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我的英语程度并没有很高,但是以下是我的一些意见1.第一段你用电脑的发明史来开头可是这和discovery好像有些冲突,discovery意指发现,而电脑应该是invention,因此第一段似乎是不成立的.discovery意指发现,即在已存在东...
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